Friday, October 8, 2004

Memories Comments

Rating: 3.9

the happy days were all just a dream
something to remember with a smile,
a thousand years ago it seemed.
i remember us together, walking hand in hand
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Elsa Bear
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Andrew Jones 12 January 2005

That was a good write. Your stuff is quite intriguing, keep writing.

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Elsa Brooks 14 October 2004

your very welcome Monica, ive been trying so long to say the right words too and now i feel i fianlly can. x

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Nicole Etheridge 08 October 2004

i really like this poem because i can relate to what you are saying. i've there to but i could never find the right words to say and u just said them so well Thank You Monica

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