Wednesday, May 18, 2016

Memories Comments

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We may have seen it coming
Yet it still seemed a surprise
The life had left your body
Before you closed your eyes
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Jayne Doe
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 May 2016

I can hear that nickname The one that she called me I remember how I loved To keep her company...........lovely poem of innocence..... memories...... death...... blessings.. sickness..... sweetness lingering in memories............ that is life....... this is a beautiful poem of love and remembrance. thank you dear poet.tony

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Jayne Doe 22 May 2016

Thank you for comment and feedback! I appreciate it immensely.

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Briony Nicholls 18 May 2016

A beautiful reminder of how precious our memories are & how fragile these memories may become over time. A nice poem.

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Jayne Doe 18 May 2016

Thank you for your feedback!

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Untamed Heart 18 May 2016

love it. created beautifully. pouring out the true feelings.10 for you. welcome to poemhunter

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Jayne Doe 18 May 2016

Thank you for the welcome. :)

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