Saturday, May 10, 2014

Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

Memories are congregating
For their daily rendezvous,
Dancing and circling 'round my mind,
There is no averting their view
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 07 July 2021

This is bound for fame in my next showcase, to be the first one with July 2021 in its title. Good day, madam. bri ;) p.s. maybe it is MY life WHICH FAILED?

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Bri Edwards 07 July 2021

Certainly it wasn't YOUR LIFE which '. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 07 July 2021

Lora, Have i not read this before? ? ? I see no comment from me. : ) bri

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Seamus O Brian 12 September 2016

Sacrificial flame- is this a marijuana reference? Ha, had to ask. :) Very nicely written and enjoyable to read. Thank you. :)

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Adeline Foster 24 May 2014

Well written, love the subject and especially the lines/ Reflections of the past still live/ In the scrapbook of my mind/ How true. Read mine – Who Am I – Adeline

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Md Elias Uddin 17 May 2014

Memories are congregating For their daily rendezvous, Dancing and circling 'round my mind, There is no averting their view Lora is becoming more and more Lora-like everyday.

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Darlene Walsh 13 May 2014

A wonderful and true poem, we all have memories that we cherish and some we would prefer to forget, all swirling through our mind.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 12 May 2014

Hello there poet Lora. Wow, I enjoyed your poem and you are so right about the memories... You handled the topic in such a way that the read was captivated by every word. I enjoyed, Loyd If you have time, please take a look at my poem, Intimacy's Touch.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 11 May 2014

memories are bitter sweet, mixed blessings. you sketch it so nicely Lora.

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Lora Colon

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