Sunday, April 6, 2014

Memories Comments

Rating: 4.9

Voices whisper through the ether
All that's past, so long ago,
Memories of distant places
Some forgotten, some to know
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Valerie Dohren
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So what that I read it before. I will say it again 'Beautiful-simply beautiful!

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Thomas Vaughan Jones 12 April 2014

We cling to the memories Val. They contain the essence, not of what we were, but the essence of what made us what we are. Sometimes they may overwhelm us in nostalgia, but we must regret nothing. The days of splendour, the times of laughter, these will sustain us no matter how dark the present may be. This is a beautiful poem, heartfelt, written with deep emotion and definitely one to keep. Hugznstuff.

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Unwritten Soul 08 April 2014

Beautiful...and as always, the emotions is there with the words crafted its road to readers heart..definitely great stuff Val_Soul

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Valsa George 08 April 2014

Though the night is growing darker, cling on to memories sweet..... never let them languish! They are like oases in a desert! As ever a very sweet write, Val....! The sad tone is haunting!

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Mary Forrester 07 April 2014

Oh so beautiful Valerie, you are truly gifted.

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Hazel Durham 07 April 2014

Stunning write, heartfelt and so moving with a beautiful flow and rhythm! !

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Beautiful- simply beautiful!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 April 2014

Love was young and life eternal Rich the wine from ag’ed vines Fresh the wind and sweet the honey Warm the sun that ever shines. Beautiful lines. It is the fond memories that makes life worth living. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 06 April 2014

Memories are what we hold on to, they can make us cry make us happy, they can put a smile on our face for the day. A fantastic poem.

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Memories forever grace us as long as we live and remember... a ten..lovely write.

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