Memories Comments

Good imagery sir but I can't help but feel like there's more to add

I love this poem. It touched my core deeply Bravo!

Excellent poem, it contains a deepest sadness, most touchingly worded, David.

As fictional as it may be, it's full of empathy.

Silence echoes just the way memories keep coming back to tug our hearts. Very touchy poem.

Resonates with memories -- totally resonated with me. This is good writing. Top marks and putting this on my favorites list

Now the house is empty and a for sale sign hangs From the bedroom window as the cold winters chill Blows freely through the house into empty rooms Once full of laughter life and death and the aftermath. tony

A heart-rending piece of poetry, so sad and quite touching. Great rendition nicely put together.

Very touching and resonate with me. Thanks for sharing.

A write that may only be fictional really hits home to me and I am sure to many. I have lost 3 family members. You have penned this into reality.

So sad....SO NICE......

A very touching poem. It touched me.

This is a an emotional and touching verse, though fictional but so realistic in details. The use of vivid images has painted a very poignant picture.

An imaginative work brought to life. Thanks, David

This is a beautiful poem. Even though fiction, it rings so true and IS true for many readers, I'm sure. Who could not relate to this? Well written, indeed.

This poem sounded rather sad, but within it, there is truthful word! Well done, thanks for sharing, David!

one new day memories will fill the house but until then the house remains silent written with lots of emotion

Full of pathos.It touched me very much.......

Really liked your poem! So well written..Thank you.

the poem might be fictional to you but I truly understand and to certain extend relate to it. beautiful poetry...just beautiful