Monday, July 22, 2013

Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

As darkness envelops the city
I am lying alone in the beach
The moon starts disappearing in the sky
Waves retreating down the shore
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Rupesh R.K Babu
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Maha Maya 12 August 2013

Good write. keep on writing. All the best

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 July 2013

Good poem..Short and sweet....

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2013

Excellent poem, the essence of being alone comes through. Short and succinct, but a great read.

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Piyush Dey 22 July 2013

Well done! good work done....

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