Memories Comments

balanced phrases, and symmetry makes the poem a pleasant read, though the subject is grey, all natural feelings about memories...in all languages, most often poets are often seen either chasing, tracing or escaping the memories...like you are apostrophising in the end! ! !

Whatever they make us feel, however they hurt or make us tear they always are the most valuable things, people desert our lives, things change and will find an end only thing that stay there are the memories, what a wonderful poem thank you for sharing it, have a blissful day now and always!

Thank you for knocking on my door Indranil. This is so beautifully written I will read more.

memories haunts us, memories makes us happy, memories makes us sad. A different outlook. Good work.

memories.. some times we cherish, sometimes we want to forget.. a person can have different feelings..a person who had tough times in the past learn from it and wants to dive into the positive world, seeking to forget bad times. or may still remember them as a lesson. The cry to forget the tough memories is beautifully expressed here. great work.

impressive.....such nicely written poem.........i love it

Dear Indranil, Particularly drawn to your poem Memories. I am nothing more than a tradesman poet and not an artist. I struggle with each one and with each one I get a seed thought. From then on the wrestle begins some times I win sometimes not so. When I lose I put it aside and wait for another time when it's not looking and attack it again. Very best to you and yours, Ray

wow.... Really really a nice one.... I love reading it... I'm truly immersed in reading... The pain I hv today is because o the happiness I had before.... I feel as if U wrote it for me.... The way U impart ur feelings is awesome... It's not written by U but u r only used as a medium....o memories, O memories Please don't come to my mind Memories, O memories, Will you please stay behind! !

This poetic phase is there to make the best out of you. Your memories are just like passing clouds and the brilliant phase of silver line may soon descend over you.You know Mr Bhaduri, as the metal remains in the fire for longer, it gets better purified itself and becomes more precious. As you feel a trauma over the past, you redeem yourself from the clutches of sensitivity that spells a doom in the long run. Go ahead speaking out your mind ahead too.

a v nice poem...Hopes are all that we have to have a positive and bright future

frnd. your poem Memories, O Memories really nice. will you please stay behind i have posted one poem forgetiveness but i have some confusion about the word forgetiveness but the content of poem is clear. great write my frnd.

it's a process...one can't avoid!

a nicely written poem, enjoyed

Memories have pained you, I understand.That's why perhaps you ask them to stay behind! Memories both good and bad both go to weave the fabric of our lives.Let happy memories be the rainbow with vivid colours, A good write to enjoy.Thanks for the invite to share the poem.With kind regards.

Another excellent piece.... powerfully expressed. liked it!

memories.ummmmmm.loved it.

we need memories to keep our inspiration alive and kicking. where would our words come from our thoughts. fine write, keep it up.

Memories Whether rough or tough Good or bad Short or long Colored or colorless sweet or sour Dark or luminous Bright or dim Keeps our mind Ever green Let it be ever bright.

Nice poem...May your life be enveloped once again withe the bright colors of rainbow, peals of laughter and joy...

v good poem n well expressed...some memories really do haunt us n feel it would be better if they do not follow us.....