Sunday, September 23, 2012

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Rating: 4.8

The sweet breeze of your words hit
the wall of my heart, some are soft
and some are hard , soft are those still
I remember, hard ones are sent to
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Salema Khatun
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Rajnish Manga 09 January 2017

An exquisite portrayal of emotions relating to a life blessed with love recalled in a flash-back. Congrats and Thanks for sharing the poem, Salema Khatun. the freshness of your departure burns me like a missile /...guerrilla smile iron tree of your remembrance.

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2017

A well articulated piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in beautiful diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 09 January 2017

Nice articulation and blend of words and phrases. Good poem. Sylva-Onyema Uba

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 January 2017

Beauty of love is, its positive side paves the infinitely large area for poetry. Even loss of a love too does it better. Quite touching poem, deserves being the member's PoD.

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Gladys Brown Prince 09 January 2017

With strength of hope, one can always rise again, against hopelessness. Well done.

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Christina Simmons 09 January 2017

I actually had to listen to this beautifully written piece of poetry twice. You have describe the reminiscence of this brilliantly. With such great imagination. Well done for being chosen as poet of the day.

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Akhtar Jawad 09 January 2017

I rise again to my senses to water and to embrace the iron tree of your remembrance..................Great poem, congratulations.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2017

Articulate poem with fantastic vacab.I liked it,10

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 January 2017

The pain of missing ones love is beautifully spilled in the poem. Thanks for sharing and Congrats.

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Tom Allport 09 January 2017

lovely write on how we cope with loss? and the iron tree, to be virtually indestructibly.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 January 2017

Your words. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Richard Wlodarski 09 January 2017

Salema, my first exposure to your poetry, and to a love poem written in this style. Both have won over a fan. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 January 2017

Enjoyed reading your poem, Salema++++++++++ congrats on poem of the day++++++++

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Lantz Pierre 09 January 2017

The enjambment in this poem is amongst its most successful aspects. The defeat of the authoritarian intellect and giving over to the free flowing overlap of conflicting emotions is well played in the grammar and syntax here.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 July 2013

the freshness of your departure burns me like a missile, I hiccupped with the drink of your guerrilla smile, Liked this very much. A great poem to read but please put the punctuation in place!

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 05 December 2012

very well written... beautiful love poem....

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Heather Wilkins 02 October 2012

great love poem Salema. enjoyed reading

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 October 2012

Wow a lovely love poem! Show it to yor poet hubby n he wil love it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 October 2012

Yes lovely love poem that is super to read!

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North Wind 26 September 2012

really a very good poem!

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Salema Khatun

Salema Khatun

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