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The sweet breeze of your words hit
the wall of my heart, some are soft
and some are hard , soft are those still
I remember, hard ones are sent to
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A well articulated piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in beautiful diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Nice articulation and blend of words and phrases. Good poem. Sylva-Onyema Uba
Beauty of love is, its positive side paves the infinitely large area for poetry. Even loss of a love too does it better. Quite touching poem, deserves being the member's PoD.
With strength of hope, one can always rise again, against hopelessness. Well done.
I actually had to listen to this beautifully written piece of poetry twice. You have describe the reminiscence of this brilliantly. With such great imagination. Well done for being chosen as poet of the day.
I rise again to my senses to water and to embrace the iron tree of your remembrance..................Great poem, congratulations.
The pain of missing ones love is beautifully spilled in the poem. Thanks for sharing and Congrats.
lovely write on how we cope with loss? and the iron tree, to be virtually indestructibly.
Salema, my first exposure to your poetry, and to a love poem written in this style. Both have won over a fan. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day.
Enjoyed reading your poem, Salema++++++++++ congrats on poem of the day++++++++
The enjambment in this poem is amongst its most successful aspects. The defeat of the authoritarian intellect and giving over to the free flowing overlap of conflicting emotions is well played in the grammar and syntax here.
the freshness of your departure burns me like a missile, I hiccupped with the drink of your guerrilla smile, Liked this very much. A great poem to read but please put the punctuation in place!
Wow a lovely love poem! Show it to yor poet hubby n he wil love it.
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An exquisite portrayal of emotions relating to a life blessed with love recalled in a flash-back. Congrats and Thanks for sharing the poem, Salema Khatun. the freshness of your departure burns me like a missile /...guerrilla smile iron tree of your remembrance.