Monday, February 27, 2012

Memories Comments

Rating: 3.3

Memories
How hard it is to depart,
Seeing her breathing her last,
someone whom you were a part,
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Jahan Zeb
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So Close 15 November 2012

good job friend, some times it will make some body crying.....keep it up »so close«

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Vipins Puthooran 19 October 2012

Wow! ! ! ! 'it's an excellent poem! ! ! top marksss! ! !

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Farah Ilyas 09 June 2012

But, yet o dear you live and will be there, In my heart, to free it from every fear, i hav'nt any world 2 describe what i am feeling right now after reading this poem...amazing

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Shama Bukhari 24 March 2012

sad feelings ..........Beautiful poem..62

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Wahab Abdul 28 February 2012

A very nice poem, i like the poem very much for its content and treatment of the subject.

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Dave Walker 27 February 2012

A beautiful poem, like it.

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Dave Walker 27 February 2012

A beautiful poem, like it.

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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 27 February 2012

its very good man.why did u say that it will have many mistakes..ur expressions are very elegant.

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Jahan Zeb

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