In the depth of my mind
My thoughts don't see.
Like fish at the bottom of the ocean
The feel their way among old sunken ships:
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Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read my piece and share your thoughts, Walterrean. I appreciate it.
Raquel, many times we must feel our way because we just can’t see where life is trying to take us. Nonetheless, we must learn to fight all obstacles for the victory. Like the ocean, your poem is very deep. Please continue to share your wonderful gift.
wow, short and sweet and down to the point, very nice poem, i like it, well done: 0)
Well articuated and nicely brought forth with insight. A beautiful creation......