Sitting alone in my ill lit room
I was pondering over my crazy thoughts
Everything around felt null and void
Except the distant growling of a hungry street dog.
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(cont.) ...to MyPoemList, and i plan to borrow the poem to go into my soon-to-be-announced-to-PH-'friends' June 2018 showcase. i see that some of my 'friends' have already commented on this poem. my usually-monthly showcases have titles which always include the month and year. showcases are treated by PH as a single poem by me, and they appear in my list of PH poems, BUT authors are always named with their poems. if you have questions, please ask me. thanks. bri :)
a favorite line: And some are of a blunt taste no man can ever define ...AND They remain forever, etched in the bottom of the heart..OVERALL i enjoyed the poem, except i'll suggest that in the following line you change are to is: Reopening old wounds are painful as well as useless! . (continued) ..
A poignant but beautifully penned poem. Memories haunts us for the rest of our life. Well penned.10
A poignant write but with a beautiful thought at the end. Very touching. A well executed piece.10
It is normal to rethink old memories as long as they do not linger. Life is to move forward, to see what opens in the new day.
You have finished the poem beautifully. Thanks for sharing this touching poem.
“Reopening old wounds are painful as well as useless! ” - this is a wise line to finish your poem with! We always have the option to carefully select which memories occupy our minds (which is not as easy as it sounds) , but the thought of it brings a bit of consolation.
Beautiful yet painful write. Memories tends to be sweet and sour. It depends on what we want to open up. Brooding over the wounds of past is not going to help but always look up each day as fresh day to begin with. Keep writing.
Write comment. Great start, Deep. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks
Well, to stop my wandering thoughts, I kept on muttering myself “Reopening old wounds are painful as well as useless! ” sssssooooooooo true, my dear oet.... reopening the past wounds does not help in any way...... what i have found is.. whenever those thoughts appear.. just give it to God in prayer and then forget it........ thank u dear for this poem.. and its wisdom.. tony
Brooding over painful memories/ so poetic! ! Poignant write! ! !
A poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Deep.
Thanks for the comments!