Friday, May 20, 2011

Memories Comments

Rating: 4.4

Sitting alone in my ill lit room
I was pondering over my crazy thoughts
Everything around felt null and void
Except the distant growling of a hungry street dog.
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Deep Paul
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Chinedu Dike 23 May 2020

A poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Deep.

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Deep Paul 03 June 2020

Thanks for the comments!

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2018

(cont.) ...to MyPoemList, and i plan to borrow the poem to go into my soon-to-be-announced-to-PH-'friends' June 2018 showcase. i see that some of my 'friends' have already commented on this poem. my usually-monthly showcases have titles which always include the month and year. showcases are treated by PH as a single poem by me, and they appear in my list of PH poems, BUT authors are always named with their poems. if you have questions, please ask me. thanks. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 26 May 2018

a favorite line: And some are of a blunt taste no man can ever define ...AND They remain forever, etched in the bottom of the heart..OVERALL i enjoyed the poem, except i'll suggest that in the following line you change are to is: Reopening old wounds are painful as well as useless! . (continued) ..

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Nudershada Cabanes 26 May 2018

A poignant but beautifully penned poem. Memories haunts us for the rest of our life. Well penned.10

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Akhtar Jawad 17 May 2018

Memories so nicely described, beautiful!

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Deep Paul 17 May 2018

Many thanks for comments

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A poignant write but with a beautiful thought at the end. Very touching. A well executed piece.10

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Deep Paul 08 May 2018

Thanks for reading and comments

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Lyn Paul 13 April 2018

It is normal to rethink old memories as long as they do not linger. Life is to move forward, to see what opens in the new day.

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Deep Paul 24 April 2018

Thankyou Lyn Paul

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Bipasha D 13 April 2018

You have finished the poem beautifully. Thanks for sharing this touching poem.

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Deep Paul 24 April 2018

Thank you for comments

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Mihaela Pirjol 10 April 2018

“Reopening old wounds are painful as well as useless! ” - this is a wise line to finish your poem with! We always have the option to carefully select which memories occupy our minds (which is not as easy as it sounds) , but the thought of it brings a bit of consolation.

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Deep Paul 10 April 2018

Thank you for your time and comments.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 April 2018

Beautiful yet painful write. Memories tends to be sweet and sour. It depends on what we want to open up. Brooding over the wounds of past is not going to help but always look up each day as fresh day to begin with. Keep writing.

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Deep Paul 07 April 2018

Thanks for the inspiring comments

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 March 2018

Write comment. Great start, Deep. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 March 2018

Well, to stop my wandering thoughts, I kept on muttering myself “Reopening old wounds are painful as well as useless! ” sssssooooooooo true, my dear oet.... reopening the past wounds does not help in any way...... what i have found is.. whenever those thoughts appear.. just give it to God in prayer and then forget it........ thank u dear for this poem.. and its wisdom.. tony

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Vipins Puthooran 26 December 2011

Brooding over painful memories/ so poetic! ! Poignant write! ! !

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