Tuesday, July 7, 2009

Memories Comments

Rating: 4.9

Memories last forever
never do they die
true friends stick together
and never say goodbye
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whitney trott
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Sounds like you have really good memories. I think of my memories as curses and nightmares that just won't go away. Cuz like you said, they last forever.

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no name - 05 October 2009

Sounds like a HallMark card. haha. Very good. Keep up the good work.

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Justin Greene 27 August 2009

great poem, i like it ^_^

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 27 July 2009

Your poem could be better by enhancing the grammar. I hope that you will do that. Thanks you.

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Silent Speaker 10 July 2009

love the structure! ! ! ! another amazing poem! ! ! ! !

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I love writing and reading about memories. They're just so important. Fantastic work here! Great poem!

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Deborah Cromer 09 July 2009

Sharing is the best way too. Some of the best memories are made when somebody shares with somebody else. Thanks for sharing your poety! :) Deborah Cromer

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Sara S 09 July 2009

yeah memories last forever and other people remember too so watch what you're doing! ! ! 10

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i lvoe this poem great job 110% No Reason To Care

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lisa moore 07 July 2009

that expresses so much in souch little words..good work luv lisa xo :)

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Merna Ibrahim 07 July 2009

You are right in every single word! ! .....yes, the memories last forever.....! ! 10++++ Merna

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