Saturday, September 12, 2009

Memories Comments

Rating: 2.3

As the snow falls,
The memories rush in and fade,
Oh, how I wish they would've stayed,
In these glistening halls,
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Anthony Degilio
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Jean Dament 23 September 2009

I like how you used a comparison of snow with that of human fraility. It had a nice flow to it also. Ravensong

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