Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Memories Comments

Rating: 4.8

Digging my memories,
I find nothing but
darkness clawing at
the flesh of my mind.
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koyel mitra
COMMENTS
Ahmad Shiddiqi 30 November 2008

very nice! keep writing! dear, friend. could you read and comment on my newest poem, Mumbai Mourning, please? thank you.

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Gutter Box 04 November 2008

nice poem i like it maybe u may have some time 2 check out some of mine.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 October 2008

'This cannot go on, Life has to move on; I must burn them and live off the ashes! ' A moving composition with memories.

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Ron Flowers 28 September 2008

A good poem. A depressing situation that ends on a high note. Good work. Regards Ron

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Indira Babbellapati 28 September 2008

most lives live off the ashes...u gv voice to universal experience...

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Viola Grey 28 September 2008

I really like this one....it has some true depth...nice write

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Reetessh Sabrr 26 September 2008

writing in short if fulfills the message nothin can be more promising like this one! keep it up

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Raja Basu 23 September 2008

Inspiring for anybody fighting bitter memories. Good job.

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Tanya Stanford 22 September 2008

Strong, dramatic and very good.

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Emo Seb 22 September 2008

i really like this one.

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Bill Thomas 21 September 2008

Deep, Koyel, yet burning with hope - I especially liked the defiant ending.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 19 September 2008

wow! ..i really liked this piece...excellent treatment of a very favored subject.strong words make for strong imagery and effect.

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Raj Nandy 18 September 2008

Like the legendary Sphinix, which emerged from its ashes! Lifes force, - that 'elan vital ', as the French philosopher Bergson called it, remains supreme! Life continues to exert itself against all odds through 'creative evolution '! Good poetry Koyel! - Raj Nandy New Delhi

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Aijaz Asif 18 September 2008

life goes on no matter what only one has to be courageous enough to face it and forget the past...another fine write...thanks

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Shilesha Johnson 12 September 2008

your poem is very true and deep. great job

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 12 September 2008

The intensity in ur poem is gripping, Koyel. Thanks.

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Ivor Hogg 11 September 2008

absolute truth, Fortunately the human mind edits memories to make them easier to bear

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Greenwolfe 1962 10 September 2008

A very tender expression. But a big brutal reality. I recommend this poem and I also recommend the author read my poem called ASHES. GW62

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 September 2008

I totally agree with Syrian beauty. This is one of the best. How I missed ur poetry so far. Fascinating piece.10

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samar Halabi 10 September 2008

this is one of the best poems I have ever read great and you are right people always remember the bad moments of their lives good job +10 :) keep this great work up

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