Digging my memories,
I find nothing but
darkness clawing at
the flesh of my mind.
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nice poem i like it maybe u may have some time 2 check out some of mine.
'This cannot go on, Life has to move on; I must burn them and live off the ashes! ' A moving composition with memories.
A good poem. A depressing situation that ends on a high note. Good work. Regards Ron
most lives live off the ashes...u gv voice to universal experience...
I really like this one....it has some true depth...nice write
writing in short if fulfills the message nothin can be more promising like this one! keep it up
Deep, Koyel, yet burning with hope - I especially liked the defiant ending.
wow! ..i really liked this piece...excellent treatment of a very favored subject.strong words make for strong imagery and effect.
Like the legendary Sphinix, which emerged from its ashes! Lifes force, - that 'elan vital ', as the French philosopher Bergson called it, remains supreme! Life continues to exert itself against all odds through 'creative evolution '! Good poetry Koyel! - Raj Nandy New Delhi
life goes on no matter what only one has to be courageous enough to face it and forget the past...another fine write...thanks
absolute truth, Fortunately the human mind edits memories to make them easier to bear
A very tender expression. But a big brutal reality. I recommend this poem and I also recommend the author read my poem called ASHES. GW62
I totally agree with Syrian beauty. This is one of the best. How I missed ur poetry so far. Fascinating piece.10
this is one of the best poems I have ever read great and you are right people always remember the bad moments of their lives good job +10 :) keep this great work up
very nice! keep writing! dear, friend. could you read and comment on my newest poem, Mumbai Mourning, please? thank you.