Monday, March 6, 2006

Memories Comments

Rating: 2.5

I remember when we used to play in the sand
I remember the first time I held your hand
So long ago, but still in thought
This memory is not something that can be bought
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adam cliff
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Ernestine Northover 12 March 2006

A pleasant poem Adam, and the story flows well through it. Second from last line is a bit flat, breaks into other peoples lives, and breaks away from the actual poem being about you. Otherwise a nice poem, and nice to read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Summer Song 12 March 2006

I really like this poem, It's beautiful!

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