I remember when we used to play in the sand
I remember the first time I held your hand
So long ago, but still in thought
This memory is not something that can be bought
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A pleasant poem Adam, and the story flows well through it. Second from last line is a bit flat, breaks into other peoples lives, and breaks away from the actual poem being about you. Otherwise a nice poem, and nice to read. Love Ernestine XXX
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A pleasant poem Adam, and the story flows well through it. Second from last line is a bit flat, breaks into other peoples lives, and breaks away from the actual poem being about you. Otherwise a nice poem, and nice to read. Love Ernestine XXX