Wednesday, March 5, 2008

Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’m sick of this pain please make it all go away
I’m tired of that memory of the day you left me

I never loved you until you were gone
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Innocent Angel Mendoza
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Wow... Seb neva said ur poetry was this heart-renching... Great work and keep writting...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 March 2008

brave on and face the odds upfront.................

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hi seb told me to check ya out i really like your poem it is full of the pain i feel u have in ur heart. nice writing and please keep writing more like it! i really enjoyed it!

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Suicide King 06 March 2008

A very interesting flow of sorrow, and it has a great pace, possibly a good song! Keep writing and tell Seb I said Hi lol

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Bonnie Collins 05 March 2008

very sad and filled with alot of personal emotion inwhich I could feel inside your heart as you wrote this........ Very good! ! !

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A lot of pain flows from your pen onto the page. Poetry is a good way to grapple with the twists and curves that bend our lives. Glad I got to read your poem.

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Emo Seb 05 March 2008

WOW! ! homeslice, innocent, u r awesome! ! ! lol Love ya, Seb

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