I’m sick of this pain please make it all go away
I’m tired of that memory of the day you left me
I never loved you until you were gone
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hi seb told me to check ya out i really like your poem it is full of the pain i feel u have in ur heart. nice writing and please keep writing more like it! i really enjoyed it!
A very interesting flow of sorrow, and it has a great pace, possibly a good song! Keep writing and tell Seb I said Hi lol
very sad and filled with alot of personal emotion inwhich I could feel inside your heart as you wrote this........ Very good! ! !
A lot of pain flows from your pen onto the page. Poetry is a good way to grapple with the twists and curves that bend our lives. Glad I got to read your poem.
Wow... Seb neva said ur poetry was this heart-renching... Great work and keep writting...