Saturday, April 23, 2005

Memories Comments

Rating: 3.3

The child’s eyes reflect the firelight,
Liquid eyes mirror the dancing flames.
She stares trancelike no longer thinking.
The windows of her soul closed
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Elizabeth Russell
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Scarborough Gypsy 23 April 2005

Elizabeth, I was sitting right there next to the girl by the fire as I read this. I could see the flames and feel the heat on my face and I could feel her pain. Loved it. Another 10. Gypsy

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