Memoirs Comments

A rising contemplation has been portrayed with a wonderful thought conveying the message of hope and tranquality. The historical background is hidden in the poem that has been written through a good scholarly personal knowledge Tara....10/10

A beautiful smile remains in the heart for ever, that is love, good art work dedicated to love, thanks for sharing,10++

I surrender myself to you my young friend. Simple and deep.

a good philosophical writes, very simple structure, and geat messages of doke of love

This poem is different from your earlier ones. The ones which were filled with passion. This one is more detached or resigned I don't know what to say. There is an easy flow to the poem except the last stanza where it stops between a tear and smile. Relations do demand sacrifice, a few tears and few smiles.

I really liked your poem.

ammu....... Memory is a man's real possession...In nothing else is he rich......... beautiful poem........... keep writing........ love...kuttus