Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Memoirs Of A Nightingale (P.31) Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was late in the evening
As I worked in a fevered rushing way
Flowing in sync with the rain
The clapping storm that filled the day
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Phoebe Lichten
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Chris Blazo 19 August 2012

Nice imagery and the dark, but sexual feeling of the rain.

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Captain Cur 14 August 2012

Beautiful love poem filled with descriptive imagery and feeling. I liked the rain in the background unsettling, like the turmoil of emotions.

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