Memoir Of A Leaf. Comments

I like the sense, the cleannes of air, blue sky and I already felt a fly in sweet cold air

But to hover like a majestic kite.... great

I made a revisit today. Loved reading it again. Great, I felt.

Leaf leaves long lasting impression...so is your beautiful poem...

BAD BAD BAD NO ADS BAD! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! NO NI NO NO

Very good discriptions of wanting freedom.

Excellent writing! Hats off

a great piece of writing, dear poetess! a beautiful personification of a leaf that struggles through his life like us. a beautiful imagery! a powerful speech! greatly narrated!

I was destined not to die or to dry, But to hover like a majestic kite Spreading her untiring wings across, I was destined not to die or to dry, In that pit of vanquished dreams. Now let me just sweep and fly, To a land of a timeless springs Where no leaf would fall by their tree ..............very sweet

Beautiful poem Ashika. I would also say an Inspiring one with beautiful message that do not give up in any way. Keep flying and soaring to a great height. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

I like the personification of this leaf. A thought provoking poem.

good poem it is.....................

This is a beautiful poem on hope having thrilling expression and nice collocation. A highly imaginative poem in the title of 'Memoir Of A Leaf' has been astutely delineated with great hope. It may be cited..... I was destined not to die or to dry, In that pit of vanquished dreams. Now let me just sweep and fly, To a land of a timeless springs Where no leaf would fall by their tree. Thank you dear Ashika, keep the ball rolling.10

This is fabulous piece of poetry! I admire your adorable style of penning! My great pleasure reading this beautiful poem time and again!

I dreamt the heights that are clean and free, Where the lonely eagles soar and fly, I dreamt to fly in those deep blue skies, Where the air is sweet and cold. I was destined not to die, ....................i fly into the land of timeless springs. just wonderful imagination. and full of hope and determination.. thank u dear poetess. tony

wonderful! An insight pain well dipicted. thank you.

Work of an active imagination, well conceived and nicely penned with conviction. Beautiful motivational piece of poetry written with insight. Thanks for sharing Ashika and do remain enriched.

I dreamt the heights that are clean and free, Where the lonely eagles soar and fly, I dreamt to fly in those deep blue skies, Where the air is sweet and cold. - - Best-loved lines that touched my heart...Thanks for sharing, dear Ashika. Where there is good poetry, there is the land of a timeless springs.

Loved it. Hope is powerful than hopelessness

Good poem about the plight of a Leaf! ! veryu much liked the stanza I was destined not to die, But to steer in the winds that are swift and strong. I was destined not to die or to dry, But to hover like a majestic kite.. thank you for sharing Poet..10+!