~ Memo To Missy ~ Comments

Nice rhyme my dear Your english but your poems look eastern

Reads like a budding flower - BRAVO

Ahh Nivedita, long time since I have read you and I have forgotten how it is to be moved by you. You regale us with a subtly quaint and flabberghasting tale of mythics and tethics rolled in to one, like a supple flower in full bloom proud and beautiful, bending in the winds caress... somehow in the world of naivety, all those knight cannot breach or beseech proper behaviour around a fair maiden lol! Excellently and eloquently descriptive in your wonderful style. Well done and keep on writing like you do. Dale :)

What a laden warning to a virgin to beware the fellows courting her innocence. How deliciously indicative of her blossoming newness and enticement as well as the inherent dangers. Excellent imagery and message. Beautiful.

wow thats intriguing (spl?) . love it.

In simple terms... I LOVED IT! ! ! !

Something new and different. It was so funny and enjoy it very much.10+

Is it essentially required to get 'eve-bashing' for a poetess as my earlier commentator wrote? Perfectly not all poetess imbibe form in-built sensitive tracer by very body-eyes-phonetic language &c of such faux / fakes just swarming/mushrooming around globe plus every 15 minutes or less a woman is raped raw-ly /brutally and news paper and other electronic media poring out...these are enough to get the rod-maps of fakes/faux.... About the poetry I've nothing to add as Gloss Glitter has nice sliced and commented also I must admit Poet Gautam Sen has equally well commented and also other readers I must say last stanza the Missy is ready to give allness &c to a real lover...thanks for sharing 10+

This one is good and you always have lots of energy to throw around by such writes so excellent. Lol why so you say Fake Faux did you encounter one and let your anger out through your poem hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahaha. To be free is every ones birth right so Good.

Good one............ After long time to read your page......... loved it.......

GLOSS GLITTER and GAUTAM SEN have analysed your poem nicely from two different angles Your poetry is of different kind; expression and style are something new I think in these columns Deploy cordon on O' Missy Your romantic Gauzy filmy paired Horizontal leaves Vertical twin pink petals Floodgate fairyland. -beautifully woven lines To say beware of boys simply you took a nice romantic poetic choice French words add colors to your poetry thanks for glossary Wishes NIVEDITA ====KAVIN CHARALAN

i agree with Hans. certainly, a good poem with unique style

I like to address this poem as I've understood ~ [1] '...Lissome bulges Svelte soigné Unbloomed lotus....' [2] '...Your romantic Gauzy filmy paired Horizontal leaves Vertical twin pink petals...' This lines are 'ultra-filtered' lines sensual zones of a woman..poet took utmost care to keep up the modesty [3] 'fake faux' being a male commentator I can say not all are like that but poets feelings are are very near to truth [4] Poet in last four lines dame affirming to give her all Excellent and a classy...enjoyed much 10++

Hello, After a pretty long gap I happened to visit this site and read your poem. You've opened you mind towards a virgin mind with your deep thoughts within and a cautionary message altogether you wanted to convey her as I gathered from the whole poem (don't know right or wrong) ... your strong vocabulary added here (sometimes some french improvisation) perhaps helped here to place your message more strongly. For me though it took time too to get the essence of the whole thought. However, as usual its spontaneity moved me. Just keep it up.

very refined piece of work.. i njoyed it a lot.........

I love it so much, it shows the reality somehow, keep in good work. I hope you'll read mine :)

I like the style and more even the content. We have enough of fake in our world. When we are young, we tend to be obseessd by external beauty, all induced by the media As we grow a bit mature, we appreciate more and more the inner beauty. Not everybody however matures. I think this poem is a very well wrtten poem. Excellent Please read my poem, Y., . Ugly Excellent, Ms. Niv

You are an amazing minimalist....I must say.

Good Work My friend...Keep it up...!

A good warning, but beware, not all guys are out to take advantage, and Missy should know that in these things all is two way, and she should become a force to be reckon with, never a victim