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The day is breaking with such lament
As I pace my way with my head bent
I saw your face on the freezing ground
And worked my way out without a sound
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Concise yet expressive composition... Nicely written.. Your actually poetic LOGAN! .. haha.. Though I wonder why is it so dark, so dismal, so grievous... What pain caused you to write this? ? Keep writting... :)
I enjoyed this poem with it's deep thoughts on the passing of someone special in this person's life.
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7/23/2025 8:14:39 PM # 1.0.0
this is powerful with so many expressions that just shoults out pain and misery :) :)