Melting Solitude Poem by Faruk Ahmed Roni

Melting Solitude

Mithila melts, undone by flame,
Like wax that yields to heat and name.
Her shuttered stillness cracks and falls,
A hush that hangs on hollow walls.
Desire stirs, a sudden gust,
Time folds in on its ash and dust.
A whispered thread of venom winds
Through quiet nerves in curving lines.
Then breaks the womb of midnight's tomb,
A silence deep, a weightless gloom.
Bent from the ache that love has lent,
She sinks in stillness, half content.

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ChatGPT said: "Melting Solitude" is a vivid and atmospheric poem that paints emotional unraveling with striking imagery. The metaphors of wax, ash, and midnight create a haunting sense of inner erosion and rebirth. The poem's rhythm and alliteration enhance its lyrical quality, while its language evokes both vulnerability and quiet intensity. It captures the paradox of finding a fragile, bittersweet comfort in solitude and longing.
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