Wednesday, August 27, 2008

! ! ! Melting Shadow! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

where is the room of reeks ruffling
Time when flecks into reels of eons
have a wild laugh by the dream
the world will smile with you
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Dr subhendu kar
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 31 October 2009

‘…as riffs of shadow just melt away // darkness dissolves by stunning sun rays…’ Sweet treble and soprano is echoing [melting-in] in ears like liquid euphony. Well written Sir Dr. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Please read / comment on my poems: Checkmate [In Elite 500] Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] or other poems please Dr. niv

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Greenwolfe 1962 17 January 2009

A beautiful soothing write. To be expected. Glistening in the sun. Lovely images for the imagination. GW62

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My heart skipped a beat....'tis lovelly!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2008

very clean astonishing poem......I liked it.............10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 September 2008

Shadows in the melting shadows..................locking n grilling the darkness of brightess days! excellent!

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Tsira Goge 05 September 2008

I highly appreciate yours of professionalism, very beautiful poems. Thanks for it. 10... Tsira

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 04 September 2008

Interestind and wonderful write by you.I am impress by this write of yours and I also like the name you gave to this poem.

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 01 September 2008

Darkness dissolves by sunrays...i AM SO INSPIRED BY THE IMAGERY OF THIS! Interesting title my friend...another Great write Sub. Please keep sharing your thoughts so well... Take care of U Shelley

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Roy Storey 30 August 2008

Shadows and light a key to a poem. thank you.

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Awesome words were used. Vivid poem with great imagery. I love this. Thanks for sharing. best regards, joan d.h.

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Anjali Sinha 27 August 2008

'leaf may not stop its sway by the sultry breath of the breeze as riffs of shadow just melt away darkness dissolves by stunning sun rays ' I like this para the best. Your poem is heavy and mature. Very powerful with deep meaning. Great write Dr. Kar. We love your poems. Keep writing. You rightfully deserve a +10 regards anjali

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