Melting Of Morals. Comments

‘…It keeps a lot hidden/yet yearns for the forbidden….’ What is open and forbidden is enigmatic…forbidden becomes open to them who participated …so it becomes open to 2 subjects…not forbidden any more…there is nothing absolute forbidden…but absolute open exists …as our secret thoughts are open to us…is it forbidden? Finally you’ve concluded: ‘…kept staring at our morals/that lay scattered, gathering the dust.’ I’d say ‘golden-dust’ or ‘diamond-dust’…2 souls wanted pure warmth it’s the morale… Excellent diction dear brother… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK PS today's Forbiddeness is tomorrows Openness e.g Live together &c n

intensely emotional. brings the reader to a sudden climax; then makes an attempt at post mortem...leaving the reader to answer the 'why', knowing it is the ' I '. simple and poignant write. Thanx for sharing. Leonard

Your words are illustrating my mind.. very nice writing!

A tale of human frailities and passion so beautifully described.

that was like watching a movie...morals apart...in love and war everything seems far...you have excellently written with a lot of passion

Suberb, how beautifully u hv desribed love, GREAT...! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++

passion tht was burning within each other is brought out reallly nice....gr8....work: D

i doubt i will b able to do justice to this masterpiece, by mere commenting on it. nobody can bring such passion by sheerl words.SUPERB

yeap I agree with Bob Blackwell, this fine piece has a magnatism! highly persuasive! well done! 10+

touché, Ok! so the story begins. Beautifully written. Law of attraction at work! I dont know how to rate, but the poem's soul is hanuting.

Passion burns strangly in this well written poem, attraction a magnetic influence that draws and pulls one to unavoidable and inevitable love. I can feel it now. Well done 10++

Sweet surrender, told in such a way by you I was spellbound, excellent work Siddharth 10 Lynda xx

Immediately what comes to my mind is a hindi song 'Zindagi bhar nahi bhulegi woh barsaat ki raat'. As fire melts the snow naturally, so does passion melt the morals. The title itself speaks a lot. If one could see a poem, ur poem would be seen in deep fiery red colour. As wind forcefully pulls a boat in the sea, so does sensuality pull two humans away from the moral code. 'One day fate brought our dreams alive', an excellent line and a complete set of commentary can be written on it.10 for the concept and 10 for the sensuality. But still they make only 10 so 10.

excellent visual metaphor: ''At home I lit the fireplace, saw the reflections of the flame dancing in the raindrops dripping down her sultry frame.'' well embedded into this wonderful poem, lovely to read.........10+++

Sweet surrender, two souls anchor onto each other seabed.Lovely!

You give yourself away in words very effectively. And the mood of this riveting piece is only enhanced by the rainscape in which it was created. The metaphoric implcations of your last lines are sad but inescapable..10/10. Best regards, Sandra

A very realistic poem. The description of the two people melting their morals down is so awesome, that i could actually visualize it. the lady dripping in the rain must have been really sensuous. I would rate this poem as the best u have written so far.a 10+++++and many more+++++s

so passionate and intense is your description of forbidden love that it does not seem forbidden anymore..the last two lines are simply awesome I loved it...10 for you Love Preeti

Siddharth, I am really speechless its simply an awesome poem wow what a revelation of those boundaries of melting morals. Your poems are so realistic Im your great fan surely an A++ and 10++ from me anjali

for me this one is the best one you wrote because i could feel the expression for the first time in english poetry. rishi commented from ruchi id