Friday, December 7, 2018

Melting Icicle Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rising tides of temptation led you to her silver shore
Effervescent laughter fell from lips long remember
Beauty was a beacon she saw little of in her mirror
Only until you showed how she did shine
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Ratnakar Mandlik 07 December 2018

The intensity of emotions flowing through the poem is simply touching. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Susan Lacovara

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