Sunday, November 18, 2018

Melting Frost Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cant see but i can feel
The breeze that steal
My heart from me
And i love this i agree
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Rini Shibu
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Kostas Lagos 19 November 2018

This poem is sooo beautiful!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 November 2018

I became a melting frost... wonderful contemplation! A beautiful poem Rini.. well penned....10

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Lamar Cole 18 November 2018

This is a very good and a very heartfelt poem about melting frost.

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Chinedu Dike 18 November 2018

Beautiful love poem, well articulated and nicely penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely creation. Thanks for sharing Rini.

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Practicing Poetess 18 November 2018

Rini, enjoyed this sweet poem about love! Continue to melt- - the warmth of love is much nicer than freezing alone! : -)

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M Asim Nehal 18 November 2018

Philosophical poem, life is slipping like sand from hand and frost, great use of metaphor, Loved it 10/10

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