Saturday, April 21, 2012

Melted Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brain Pain Freeze
Handcuffed to my silence Tongue on ice
Thoughts cubes choke in my throat
Grew a goiter sadness spawned anger icicles crystallized soulless salt
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Romeo Della Valle 21 April 2012

Bravo! A reservoir of strong words freely dancing in each line giving this well crafted write harmony and strength! WELCOME to the Poetry World! Your talent is shown through this thought provoking write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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