Monday, October 23, 2017

Melt Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

He called her his fire
She called him her ice
He tried to act cold
Her warmth felt too nice
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Sister Frances
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Unnikrishnan E S 25 February 2018

Hi Hannah, Wonderful poem. Just reminded me of your old poem: : BURN ME: : . Why dont you post it again here? Or may I? -unnikrishnan

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Binayakumar Mohanty 10 November 2017

Poem is just away from self pretention.I loved. Beautiful poem shared.Thanks

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 October 2017

A blazing pen-gem, Hannah...Stellar structural movement throughout...Keep that pen pumping! ~FjR`

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Sister Frances 23 October 2017

lol Thank you...please read more I'd like to think this isn't my only stellar poem :)

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Paul Brookes 23 October 2017

Enjoyed this one good write thanks

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Sister Frances 23 October 2017

Thank you Andy..fire and ice

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