Friday, January 10, 2014

Melt Into A Stare Comments

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Your coldness appalls me!
Trying to follow your example
Went to obedience school
Grew a tail, taught myself
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Doris Cornago
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Doris Cornago 10 January 2014

Yes, Marvin, this is dangerous territory. Sometimes reality mixes with our dreams that we get confused. Was the promise real or imagined? Is the person, real or just a whippoorwill? The whip-poor-will (a bird) is commonly heard within its range, but less often seen because of its superior camouflage. It is named onomatopoeically after its song. So, is this man just a sound, or the image of a sound? Tell me if you understand any of this.

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Marvin Brato 10 January 2014

Great narration of an insightful sentiments....thought provoking!

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