Melt Away Poem by Aqua Flower

Melt Away

Rating: 5.0


I felt my heart melt
as I read your loving words
not always heard but written in a letter
it confirms that we will stay together
this life, these obstacles, seem hard to get through
but I know it is easier, knowing that I have you
Let me melt away in your embrace
let us copy and paste
what we had before
your love's consistency
will not be ignored

Sunday, July 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: endurance,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 19 July 2018

let us copy and paste what we had before your love's consistency will not be ignored Let us make compromises, life is itself a compromise. I loved this beautiful poem as I love compromises.

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Life IS full of compromises. I think that is where our imagination and dreams come in to fill in the gaps! :) Glad you liked the poem! :)

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Bill Cantrell 17 July 2018

To melt in love is a beatiful thing, by doing this all walls and barriers are lowered and the wonderful experience of acceptance is embraced, wonderful love poem from the princess of love!

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Aqua Flower 17 July 2018

Thank you! You definitely interpreted melting correctly in this poem! Princess of Love? When one is treated like a princess, she shall always feel loved like a princess, thus everything will become magical :)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 July 2018

Let me melt away in your embrace THIS LINE makes me feel as if 'twere a reply to a loved one's plea if so then 'tis lovely do read my moms smiles and mothers day today you as a mom may like it and green doors to do gloss if you chance perchance

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Aqua Flower 18 July 2018

It was a response to a plea....how well you interpreted this!

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Rini shibu 08 July 2018

Such a beautiful poem..melts the readers heart

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Aqua Flower 19 July 2018

Such a beautiful comment! Thank you!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 July 2018

Melting of heart is wonderfully felt with love and endurance. This poem is really very brilliantly penned. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Aqua Flower 18 July 2018

Thank you for always responding positively to all my poems and writing such wonderful comments

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