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Tonight inside my poetry room / all are gathered / Poe, Paz, / Brautigan and Rimbaud…/ Silently watching a new second Of an old year- - - - - - - > Soran, any of the above writers would have been proud to pen these words for posterity. A powerful poem that is now going to sit on my fav shelf ...10+++++.

Tonight grief is in meditating welcoming a new year.=====> Now those 3 lines with their 9 words are setting the tone of the piece with a vengeance! ! !

Dear poet Rose Marie Juan-austin I was amazed by your excellent way of reading this poem, and this is evidence of your great ability in the world of poetry, I am wondering how beautiful you are when you write the poem or comment, thank you from the heart

" Tonight grief is meditating, welcoming a new year. A few numbers and some tear drops spill outside my window. " Beautiful lines from a great, deeply poignant and moving poem. Superb imagery. To my treasure chest.

An exceptional poem well woven by a thinker and a brilliant mind. The opening lines alone abruptly sway a reader to that realm where the mind of the Poet is going to. Very striking and deep lines that tingle the mind are embedded in this wonderful write. A work of a true Poet.

Narrow pathway! ! Muse of the storm! ! ! ! ! Facing the rules of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.