Melt Poem by Soran M. H

Melt

Rating: 5.0


Outside of my window
2020 and 2021 are fighting

Whereas storm is howling
they push each other the harder

Wind repeatedly saying to them:
It is your monsters' fight
Inside of you.
while they know
The world of Death is much bigger
Than the Life.

Tonight
grief is in meditating
welcoming a new year.
A few numbers
And some tear drops
spill outside my window

Around this narrow pathway
there is not any trace
for Santa Claus
or those fireworks
happily dancing in the sky.

Tonight inside my poetry room
all are gathered
Poe, Paz,
Brautigan and Rimbaud…
Silently watching a new second
Of an old year .

Sunday, May 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2019

Narrow pathway! ! Muse of the storm! ! ! ! ! Facing the rules of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soran M. H 26 December 2019

great comment by the famous poet Edward...Cheers

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Susan Williams 05 September 2020

Tonight inside my poetry room / all are gathered / Poe, Paz, / Brautigan and Rimbaud…/ Silently watching a new second Of an old year- - - - - - - > Soran, any of the above writers would have been proud to pen these words for posterity. A powerful poem that is now going to sit on my fav shelf ...10+++++.

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Susan Williams 05 September 2020

Tonight grief is in meditating welcoming a new year.=====> Now those 3 lines with their 9 words are setting the tone of the piece with a vengeance! ! !

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Soran M. H 29 July 2020

Dear poet Rose Marie Juan-austin I was amazed by your excellent way of reading this poem, and this is evidence of your great ability in the world of poetry, I am wondering how beautiful you are when you write the poem or comment, thank you from the heart

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 July 2020

" Tonight grief is meditating, welcoming a new year. A few numbers and some tear drops spill outside my window. " Beautiful lines from a great, deeply poignant and moving poem. Superb imagery. To my treasure chest.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 July 2020

An exceptional poem well woven by a thinker and a brilliant mind. The opening lines alone abruptly sway a reader to that realm where the mind of the Poet is going to. Very striking and deep lines that tingle the mind are embedded in this wonderful write. A work of a true Poet.

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