With money and action, here lives an antagonist!
Yet why not our protagonist from East - who is a humanist,
With noble ideas - he, an eleemosynary philanthropist,
With soft corner in his heart, he, an altruist.
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I like the way you went about this poem, its very well written. :) 'He drank knowledge for tea and snacks He ate vocabulary for lunch He had idioms and expression for brunch; ' Superb lines.
Writers are usually melancholic people, but somebody has to do it! Great poem, and no matter how bizarre it feels, don't give up...don't bury a talent.. :)
Failed to ape the fools in action for food, Failed to ape the fools in action in the unknown city! Truly defines the melancholy in the mystic mood.Well done..
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Oh what a miss losing the golden heart hanged in the room...The story should open many eyes to see the reality situation which many of us neglected to bear, I found this one just quite different than your own style Harindhar, you done it well as always, with the heart you roll together with the ink, i can feel the beats in the writing..they sound humanity..Inspiration about life is important to keep harder become softer.. we know it cant make challenge to be blunt but it gives hope to shine.. Harindhar through this words you really deserve a golden ink so people must read whenever you write.Nice deep poem my dear friend_Unwritten SOul
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