Saturday, March 29, 2008

Melody Of The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ancient friends appreciate
My ghost-like face
That has weathered loneliness
And the melody of the rain.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Sandra Fowler 06 April 2008

Poets belong to the wind, the rain and the dusk. Your melody is playing time out of mind. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Will Barber 30 March 2008

The first stanza grabs the reader. The rest carries beyond. This is such a fine capture of a mood. Eloquent, and quite beautiful. Write on, Uriah. Your voice speaks volumes. I would compare this poem to Zen verse. Emptiness is, perhaps, the point of departure. This poem is profoundly wise, and sad. I think wisdom must always include sadness. - Will

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