~~~melody Of The Empty Bottle~~~ Comments

amazing metaphor of self...

and also i like the metaphors

This is good, but it could use a little bit of work

What an imaginative poem! Just love the original and creative approach, Raju

hhhmmmmm..nice one..when ur alone and feeling lonely, just write anything n ur page, u will notice, after some drops of sweat, u can find happiness...that is poetry dear...smileeeeeeeeeeeeee