Wind blowing half heartedly
in the woods of skinny trees
Socrates and Descartes
occupying my illogical mind
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Very profound.Everything in this world moves to the music. Beautiful write, Dr. Kamran. Warm regards, Sandra
Kamranbhai, Is the melody of pain unbearable? Something you want to wallow in? It is said that the pain sufferer best understands what he/she is suffering from...and how intensely. Mozart (my favorite) , Beethoven, Liszt, Chopin, Paderwerski, Brahms, Handel, Tchaikovsky...etc. are melody masters...of MUSIC. And now...we have...the master of the melody of...PAIN....Kamran Haider.... Now, Kamranbhai, who would you like to share this melody with? ? ? I love this melody, but..oh, so, slowly, so that I can enjoy the pain until it becomes pleasurable... Cheers. Subroto.
this melody of pain is a great expression from inside personality..well done and well written..lines are well arranged and make this poem more beautiful.. naizz
the poem is very beautiful.... the combination of melody and pain is unique, Your feelings have been brought out clearly!
this is universal sorrow that fills every heart at some point or the other...can we call ourselves human but for this pain we experience! the pain that invests this heart with human(e) qualities...
I understand yor poem.I've written quite a few about death. Perhaps you should get someone to prescribe Seroxat.
hmmmmmmmmm you and your new found love 'death' Go and embrace it go--- the whole world is running away from it and you want to embrace it. Go--- leave us all here as destitutes. You have brought out the poignancy well here only only for that you get +++10 and certainly not for your theme which I detest. hey Kamran dont feel bad I said what I felt take care and love anjali +++10
I love the way you ended this piece below: This life is a symphony of innate heartaches I being ignorant and emotionally troubled have fallen in love with this melody of life called pain You put symphony and words, and that makes this write beautiful. And i agree that our life is made of inner heartaches But we don't have to focus and dwell on this thing Life is beautiful we only have to make it to the fullest each day thanks for this great sharing.. Hugs, Meggie
As a lover of these classic composers, I think you have put a clever slant on you poem with the pain theme. 'Fallen in love with the melody of life called pain. Very different. Top Marks
Respected dr. very beautiful presentation...and the way you knitted the theme with music really appreciable......
The great philosophers and pianist, the 3 men of my life, simply joined together in this heartfelt poem...to have the sonata of pain, played well in melodious verses...10+++
Artful profound...life as a whole is a melody of pain...thanks for this well thought out write...10