Lay me
Amongst the melody that is Mozart
Weave his notes in my lank dark hair
Spirit me to a world of horses
...
Read full text
Karen this is a beautiful write. Full of sensual imagery that pleases even the weary. It's power also draws sadness as when even grandure is diminished through loneliness. Such as I... I like it very much though.
beautiful poem with all famous people, who work for this poem Nice!
last stanza is truly elegant pacifying romance in a gorgeous setting of words, thanks for sharing.
An elegant poem! ! ! Imagery about romance in a gorgeous setting of words. Amazing poem. Vera Sidhwa
Bursting with beauty from a marvalous march of melody. Well done my friend! 10+
Sensuous and sumptuous images and emotions and love told splendidly.
a touchy poem.lots of feeling.dreams make us live when nothing is our own.it, s all nature, s drama.keep writing..best wishes
A beautiful poem that is very cleverly constructed. The gentle dreamlike rhythm is punctuated by ecstatic bursts which grab the reader's attention. Yet the opening and closing softness gives a coherence to the poem as whole. Variable line lengths, alliteration and occasional rhymes enhance this rhythm. A great achievement.