Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Melody Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lay me
Amongst the melody that is Mozart
Weave his notes in my lank dark hair
Spirit me to a world of horses
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karen sinclair
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Martin Mclean 15 November 2013

A beautiful poem that is very cleverly constructed. The gentle dreamlike rhythm is punctuated by ecstatic bursts which grab the reader's attention. Yet the opening and closing softness gives a coherence to the poem as whole. Variable line lengths, alliteration and occasional rhymes enhance this rhythm. A great achievement.

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Valsa George 11 October 2012

Sweet as a melody with capturing images! !

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Rick Elpers 07 October 2012

Karen this is a beautiful write. Full of sensual imagery that pleases even the weary. It's power also draws sadness as when even grandure is diminished through loneliness. Such as I... I like it very much though.

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Anita Sehgal 06 October 2012

melodious and soft and dreamy... lovely

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Valerie Dohren 05 October 2012

Lovely imaginative write, very inspired.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 October 2012

beautiful poem with all famous people, who work for this poem Nice!

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Heather Wilson 05 October 2012

Music, lavender, roses and dreams, a beautiful poem Karen.

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Ramesh Rai 05 October 2012

last stanza is truly elegant pacifying romance in a gorgeous setting of words, thanks for sharing.

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Vera Sidhwa 05 October 2012

An elegant poem! ! ! Imagery about romance in a gorgeous setting of words. Amazing poem. Vera Sidhwa

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Bursting with beauty from a marvalous march of melody. Well done my friend! 10+

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Danny Draper 03 October 2012

Sensuous and sumptuous images and emotions and love told splendidly.

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Rajkamal P.j 02 October 2012

a touchy poem.lots of feeling.dreams make us live when nothing is our own.it, s all nature, s drama.keep writing..best wishes

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