Sunday, January 4, 2009

Mellow The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shot-through winter sky
Bleeds, windless, with evening mist.
Kisses each distant horizon.
And I count the hours.
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Fay Slimm
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Lynda Robson 05 January 2009

Beautifully written descriptive piece Fay, thanks for sharing this with us, 10 Lynda xx

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Linda Winchell 04 January 2009

This is a very well put piece of poetry. Bravo! Ten Miss Fay!

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Sid John Gardner. 04 January 2009

Marvellour imagry Fay.Just as if I were there too.May your artistry of painting pictures for us in words be forever. Sid.xxxx

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Kris Smith 04 January 2009

Your spirit is of natureFay, it is nature, you put in on paper in words and it comes out a picture thankyou Fay 10 +++ Chris

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Bob Blackwell 04 January 2009

Fay, I remember these sort of days, a chill in the air, but oh those clear nights. beautifully written. 10/10 Bob

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 January 2009

Winter as beauty too, written so beautifully by you Fay...

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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