Thursday, January 16, 2020

Mellow Comments

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Mellow
Hello Mellow
my old friend
You can hang around
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Lee Boueri
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Michael Walker 26 January 2020

The beginning reminds me of 'Hello darkness my old friend'-Paul Simon, 'The Sound of Silence'. To be mellow I take to be quite calm and accepting, which fits well with the theme. To cruise and play some music is definitely what I would like to do in this situation.

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Lee Boueri 30 January 2020

Thank you Michael. I was certainly in a mellow state when I wrote this :) .

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 January 2020

Such a nice poem, Lee Boueri. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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