Wednesday, April 23, 2008

- Melissa - Comments

Rating: 2.8

There was deep sorrow in his eyes
He looked at me and said
-We tried it all; I speak no lies
The baby was born dead
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Greenwolfe 1962 23 April 2008

I think Ernestine's comments are right on target Dmitriy. In fact, Ernestine is, in my opinion, the best judge of any poem. No matter what kind of poem it is, Ernestine will tell you if it's good or not. She is the one peson that I have found here, who is closer to the overall public mind than anyone else. I agree with everything she said. Even what she said about the previous commentator. I will make further comments in a message. Greenwolfe 1962

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Ernestine Northover 23 April 2008

Take no notice Dmitriy of the previous comment, he is known for running peoples poems down, he has done it to me, he thinks he is the only one who can write poetry, but I myself am not impressed with his work.. This is such a sad poem and yet it is beautiful to read. A wonderful storyline which you have expressed so well, a very moving write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Dmitriy Kokarev

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