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An ivory goddess
lies on a white-washed grave.
Her raven hair
sweeps the dead
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Rebekah Gamble
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Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2008

I think you have a way with phrases that makes it possible for you to write rhythm and rhyme. I cannot say this of all writers here. You just need to work on putting the phrases together so they have a common rhythm. I know it sounds difficult, but I believe you have the skill to do it. If you wish not to do so, I'll understand. GW62

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Pittsburgh, Penna., U.S.A.
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