Tuesday, September 24, 2013

Melbourne Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ever true and verdant keen
City buds in spreading green
Gridded streets of kenyon glen
Ulmus seed in paler ken
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Danny Draper
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Ken E Hall 27 September 2013

Excellent poem on Melbourne could smell the coffee and hear the trams rattle very well constructed makes one feel they are there...perfect...regards

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Heather Wilkins 25 September 2013

beautiful imagery of Melbourne streets.

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Valsa George 24 September 2013

.The jingling rhythm of the poem matches well with the rising festivity of carnivals and the prestigious football tournaments of Melbourne in the backdrop of the warming spring days and blooming trees! ! A very enjoyable read! !

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Valerie Dohren 24 September 2013

Spring in Melbourne sounds beautiful. Sadly, its Autumn here in GB and although it has its treasures, it means that cold cold winter is on its way.

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R.benjamin Abate 24 September 2013

Out of all your poems, this one is my favorite. It's visual and rhythmic. I love it. Thanks, Danny.

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Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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