Melanie May Comments

A a love lost or perhaps admired from afar.

Very nice Tan, there's a quiet message here, I like it very much. Melvina

this is very nice.you are very good keep it up

Elegant in its simplicity and effortless flow

beautiful just beautiful

TAN...AH, the images that can be created when one takes Romance to the shore. Nice piece, and it sparkles of uniquity. Why is that you say, with the many millions of Romance by the seashore verse out there? Simple...This is the first one I've ever read where the girl/woman is not portrayed as a Renaissancesque beauty.Good capture.

Nicely done, Tan. You are a fine poet with an abundance of talent. All my best-Faith

This is a wonderful poem Tan! Its very beautifully written...simple, sweet superb! Zainab

A poem written beautifully from such tender feelings. You are a true poet by nature.

A lovely little poem with a nice flow to it well done: -))

Ah! ! ! Such lovely, tender images showing such lovely, tender feeling! ! ! Warm regards (very warm! ! ! that's how I feel inside now after reading this!) , Gina. PS: are you going to show me how to find you in the Forum, or what? Gina.