Sunday, June 28, 2009

Melancholy Turns Up Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm fast asleep, the rain pours down on this winters day.
My room is dark, the sky outside is grey.
I'm like climbing up a cliff face while gravity pulls me down.
One jump that's all it takes, just one slip to get me down.
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Adrian Cox
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Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'I'm like climbing up a cliff face while gravity pulls me down. One jump that's all it takes, just one slip to get me down' Rachel Ann Butler

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Priyanka Bhowmick 06 July 2009

reflections of a blank day... fine portrayed.

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Susan Aparejo 05 July 2009

this poem helps me reminds the vanity of being alone. Well done congrats. Thanks for reading my poem too 10/10

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Adrian Cox

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