Melancholy's Mirrors Comments
I gazed into Melancholy's mirror
And found the more I reflected on it,
The more it reflected on me
Providing a perfect symmetry
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I find myself gobbling up poems like these, the ones that paint such striking images. Great ink with alluring imagery!
Melancholy is not the state to be avoided rather it is a rich state for a poetic spirit. You have done justice with the string of images you have used here.
...Providing a perfect symmetry As beautiful and fragile as a butterfly's wings... I find it refreshing the way you see yourself, not many can gaze into Melancholy's Mirrors, and be happy with what they see. Great Write Amanda! ; -) Kelly.
the reference to mirrors and dendrites, and the context in which you used them, reminds me of Buddhism and Quantum Theory - this is heavy stuff, but painted in a way that is inviting, not intimidating. great balance! !
the reference to mirrors and dendrites, and the context in which you used them, reminds me of Buddhism and Quantum Theory - this is heavy stuff, but painted in a way that is inviting, not intimidating. great balance! !
I really like this poem. The illustration of the mirrors and the endless tunnel, beautifully blended with your suffering words. I appreciate your giving us a glimpse of a moment in your life. Beautiful and sad.
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7/20/2025 11:59:03 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderful poem full of imagery and thoughtfully constructed.