Sunday, July 17, 2016

Melancholy (Haiku) Comments

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twilight hour
moon kisses elm tree;
robin sulks
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Govind Ramakrishnan
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Guru Kothandaraman 17 July 2016

Reach and touch nature made possible through this poem. Well done.

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Gil Highlander 17 July 2016

Poor robin, jealous at the kiss away. Perhaps next time.

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Stephen Park 17 July 2016

One word: beautiful and paints a lovely picture

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