Friday, October 27, 2006

Melancholy Ghost Terribly Obtuse Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walk through river mist
Remembering the feelings when we kissed,
Too many days forlorn in a foggy past,
Abandoned and tossed away.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ernestine Northover 28 October 2006

Oh, Uriah, this is a most eloquent write. It melts into itself so well, flows along and kindles a deep stirring feeling in one's soul. Expressed with such ambience. Just a beautiful creation. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Fowler 27 October 2006

True poetry always has the power to move the reader. Very eloquent write. Regards, Sandra

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 27 October 2006

What a sadly beautiful Poem, Uriah...Finely structured...refined language...this, my friend is Solid Literary work.... '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F J R}

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