.melancholy Dream Comments
Many times when I’m alone, I dream of when we used to go
With sandwiches, out to the lake and watch the people swim
We’d laugh and play for hours, games with little meaning
Until the day had faded, then we’d pack and head for home
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A very inspirational write and what a lovely feel you have given this... Very nice flow.... bonnie
Such yearning in your soul as our children are part of us. You have described your time together skilfully and sensitively. Excellent writing. Karin Anderson
Richard, This is a beautifully written poem and very emotional. All the best to you and family. Jim
Excellent touching poem Richard...beatiful flow throughout it...thank you...10++
brilliant write.......very passionately written....I loved it. 10
pouring out your heart in worship and prayer. Very well penned with rhythm and flow. CP
you wrote this in ' 75 I assume your son is no longer alive and that's very sad I believe you will be together someday
A truly wonderful write Richard, it's like a beautiful prayer. Best wishes, Andrew
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7/28/2025 11:11:31 AM # 1.0.0
Very touchy and emotional... Well written