Melancholy Comments

This beautiful poem gets full marks from me,5*****

The poem was alright; it was describing sound, songs and loud cacophonous music, until at the end it suddenly turned sad and melancholic. True, absence of spiritual harmony turns all our melodious songs of life into discordant, dissonant, cacophony.

I agree with what you say but the solution is not in brooding but discovering like Faraday cage or many more which I don't know but you know still don't apply.

In order to the the rhythm right the essence is getting lost and that is true melancholy for me. Earth is suffering the same and so do we. Let loose everything, let the birds fly without fear, let the river go anywhere...Nice poem 5*

Till their fingers feel the harm